My first attempt on poetry:
A song for the heart, seeking a reflection
Says where are you, I am waiting for thee.
Not one beam of light, been getting darker and darker,
Where are you, I am waiting for thee.
Minutes have rolled into years,
With no sign of you nor your shadow closeby
Where are you, I am waiting for thee.
Friends go and friends come, new face all around
But those dazzling eyes, be nice
Where are you, I am waiting for thee
Not a Shakespeare, not a Wordsworth
A simple flower, trying to spread its fragrance ever
20 comments:
This is my first comment in your blog too :)
A refreshing and lively poem, which has come from the most beautiful expression of a 'sensitive' heart :)
Cheers
Santosh
@santosh - welcome onboard!! keep coming in!
If its the first attempt..then its pretty good ^_^
Keep it up
Cheers!!
Tc
First attempt - it is good - but dont wait for thee just go and look out for him :)
I did felt the fragrance.
@aayushi - thanks!
@ceedy - thanks and sure...point noted:)
@sunny - great u did
Hi Flower,
Lovely! Awesome poetry and loved the last 2 lines! If the first poem is of such stature, I can't imagine how good the next ones will be! :D
@meghna - glad you liked this and thanks!
Hey good try...a cute one..I loved the last 2 lines...keep writing more...:)
@aarthi - thanks a ton...will try and post more..
Keep it on..you are doing great..looking forward to more such ones
TC
CU
@smartphone - thanks!
@cu - thanks!will try to post more of these!
This doesnt look as first attempt, but an experienced attempt. Keep it up. BTW, are you a kannadiga?. If yes, i need a serious help from you. Let me know...:)
@jaggu - really??? thanks.........am honoured!
what help do you need from my side?
depending on the kind of help, will tell you if am a kannadiga or not:))
Ha ha. See, i need lyrics in english for a kannada song. So let me know your expertise.
@jaggu - check out your blog. replied there!
Thanks my dear.
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